Thursday, August 7, 2014

Pockets full of dreams
I carry silently
Their voices louder
Than mine could ever be

Sin of despondency
Sin of omission
False breath of relief
When at first
You destroy the dream

To appease the dangerous myth
Of Liability

12 comments:

  1. oo nice last couple words there...a myth indeed...
    i really like the opening as well...its a good thing
    you have dreams that speak loud...

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    1. ah B., dreams and nightmares, sometime I would like to stop dreaming because I dream about comes true,most of the time, blame it on my highly intuitive suspicious self lol

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  2. Beautiful! You are an artist with words as well as images. I'm sorry about the other blog not working. It's so baffling...

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    1. I know Lisa Isabella, it's driving me nuts, maybe occasionally I can slip a photo like a did above and thank you so much for visiting oops I forgot to put one today, I'LL BE right back lol

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  3. Very beautiful, Lorraine, especially the last couple of lines!

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  4. You are a wonderful poet.
    Love these lines

    'pocket full of dreams
    I carry silently
    Their voices louder
    Than mine could ever be'

    Lots of love
    xo

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    1. Thanks so much Sandy, I appreciate it so much easier than drawing, well for me anyway

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  6. Very powerful and beautiful! Big Hugs ;o)

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    1. Thank you Stacy, how are you sweetie,you feel better? There are so many people that really truly care about you, and your well-being you're in my thoughts, always

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